Power of Prayer or No Power at All
This particular piece was written during my 2nd semester of college on March 18th, 2013 as a freshman. I was deeply fascinated by prayer and chose it as the topic for majority of the works in which we were to complete during the semester. Here lies the rhetorical analysis for Mr. Bruce L. Flamm's article entitled “One Big STEP: Another Major Study Confirms that Distant Prayers Do Not Heal the Sick.” Enjoy! :)
Power of Prayer or No
Power at All
Bruce L. Flamm, senior investigator of Skeptical Inquirer and author of several
medical books, wrote an article entitled “One Big STEP: Another Major Study
Confirms that Distant Prayers Do Not Heal the Sick.” As an investigator,
Flamm’s primary goal was to investigate what he considers a misconception and
non-beneficial act regarding the power of intercessory prayer. Instilled within
him is a “I have to see it to believe it,” mentality. He firmly supports
science that includes evidence over superstition, and throughout his article he
builds a foundation of scientific research that supports as well as influences
his and other opinions. Flamm uses concrete evidence to prove his case yet only
according to science, whereas there are no actual testimonies from those who
may have experienced the supernatural.
Being a senior investigator with more than a dozen
medical research studies that have been proven according to science, Flamm has
great creditability with much publicity and authority. Many of his articles
have been featured in Time Magazine, The
New York Times, Los Angeles Times, as well as around the globe. Flamm’s
idea of factual must have evidence to go along with it, which is why he
included in this article a random double-blind controlled trial call STEP trial
(Study of the Therapeutic Effects of Intercessory Prayer). It was set up in
order to find out whether or not intercessory prayer had any effects on the
individual that was being prayed for. 1,802 patients from six different
hospitals were randomly assigned to three different groups. The first group
consisted of the individuals who received prayer after being unsure whether
they would or not. The second group did not receive prayer with the same surety
as the first group. The third group; however, was well aware that they would be
receiving prayer.
To intercede for someone means to go between or
intervene. An intercessor acts as an advocate or middleman, which means that
person is the source of getting whatever needs to go through to its destination.
As for Flamm’s article, it focuses on intercessory prayer which in biblical
terms refers to a bold request made known to God on another person’s behalf usually
due to sickness, inconvenience, or downfalls, out of love and consideration. For
some people, intercessory prayer is a spiritual gift that opens their spiritual
eyesight to see the needs of others. It links direct communication to God as it
is a self-less act that focuses on other individual’s necessities. Flamm
defines intercessory prayer as only “distant prayer” (Flamm 1) and does not
really expand on it regarding the reasons, views, and importance behind it.
Flamm’s objective is to appeal to every reader, yet those
who truly have faith in God and know the power of intercessory prayer would not
be influenced by his findings. The STEP trial consisted of three groups: those
who knew they were to receive prayer, those who did not know, and those who may
or may not be prayed for. The case study, funded by the John Templeton Foundation,
cost roughly $2.5 million dollars, which could have been put to other use such
as: feeding a starving child, helping the homeless, or finding a cure for a
disease. The fact that it was done in order to influence belief systems, as to
call it non-effective, was rather ignorant and biased in itself. Flamm claims
to avoid bias, yet he had already had a perceived opinion towards prayer before
any study was brought about. Despite his credibility, for him to argue and
follow-up with a mockery of God as well as the power of prayer is unfair and
cruel.
Throughout his article, Bruce Flamm presented an
incompetent tone regarding prayer, yet tried to conceal it so that it would not
be considered biased. He seemed rather pleased with the concluded evidence
through the descriptive words he used such, “fatal blow, ineffective, and
paranormal mechanisms” (Flamm 1-2). Throughout his research for his article, he
never actually talked with any individuals that had been cured nor anyone of
that matter that had any support for intercessory prayer. He did; however, use
the comments provided by Father Dean Marek, a Catholic priest and co-principal
investigator of STEP, that had no real effect and stood on the borderline
concerning prayer. Marek stated, “I’m sure God will be very pleased with the
results of this and getting people talking about the results of prayer in their
lives” (Flamm 2). Since the results were negative, what sense does his comment
make? His statement goes against all Christian principles and basically says in
his own way that prayer is an ineffective waste of time. Marek would most
likely be considered a traitor, since prayer is considered a central component
in Christian faith.
Regarding opposition, Flamm was not at all too hasty in
including much thought towards opposing viewpoints. He uses very little regards
towards opposition. In one sentence he sums up, Bob Barth’s comment, of Silent
Unity, “People of faith don’t need a prayer study to know that prayer works”
(Flamm 1). Throughout the entire article, this single comment is the only one
that focuses on opposition. For someone who is heavily involved in prayer and knows
the benefits and effectiveness of it would consider Flamm’s article as biased.
If an author is to write about anything, especially a controversial topic with
a motive of persuasion, the topic should focus on the argument or situation as
well as the opposition. Not everyone’s viewpoint is the same and some people
will take high offense to certain accusations and/or conclusions based solely
on very little evidence and opinions.
Flamm concludes his article with mockery of what Marek
could have meant by his comment concerning prayer. Flamm feels that he is
making excuses on God’s part and that prayer is failure. He believes in the
scientific studies yet takes in consideration that some people will remain
faithful to their beliefs and will always believe that prayer has much healing
power. Throughout his entire article, Flamm proves to be an efficient and
persuasive writer with a variety of uses that appeal to ethos, logos, and
pathos as described above; however, the effectiveness of his writing depends
solely upon the reader’s point of view.
Overall,
the argument that Flamm makes may be effective towards those who oppose prayer
in the first place as well as those who doubt the supernatural. As for those
individuals that remain faithful, have actually experienced the effects, and
know the benefits of it; the results are ineffective. The way that the article
was written; the diction, tone, and nods to the opposition will allow many to
make an assumption that Flamm is a total ass. Instead of solely focusing on the
negative, “nothing, no effects,” he could have done more with his research.
There are many individuals who have had a supernatural experience pertaining to
intercessory prayer with great effects and results, yet he failed to get their
side of the story. Flamm argues that distant prayer has absolutely no healing
effect whatsoever; but his research did not go far enough. His biased opinion
caused his argument to be ineffective, and he failed to convince this audience
member.
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